Application for Light of Argus - Nilank

Greetings fellow draenei players

Im a young woman, who have played world of warcraft for a few years now and been a roleplayer for a few more (both tabletop and LARP).

This is my application for my draenei character on Moonglade:

Character name:
Nilank

Age:
About 120-125 years old

Character background:
Nilank, a young draenei female, where one of the draenei aboard the Exodar, when it crashed down at Azuremyst Isle, she was with her mother Fricka and father Jolnar. Nilank was alone with her mother and father in a whole new and strange world.
As paladins, Nilank's mother and father, was needed in the draenei army fighting for the peace they seeked so much, so she didn't see much to them after the crash. Nilank was not yet experienced enough to join the army herself, so instead she continued her training as a shaman, hoping to join her paretns someday.
In the fight against the scourge, Nilanks father Jolnar was killed, she and her mother grieved deeply. Though less than a year later, Nilank was told that her father had been seen amongst the Knights of the Ebon Blade, now as a Death Knight, but she herself have not seen him since he left with her mother before the battle where he died.
When it finally seemed to Nilank, that her mother had some time to spend with her again, she was introduced to her mother's very near night elf friend Gerrad. Nilank quickly became very frustrated with him never letting her mother out of sight for just a single moment, which ended up in a fight between them. Nilank ended up walking away, to angry to talk.
Last thing Nilank heard of her mother, was that she had been asked to return to the army, midst in her time of liberty, what had happend to her afterwards no one knew. Only thing they could tell, was that she supposedly was on the boat sailing between Rut'theran Village and Auberdine, when Deathwing flew by and destroyed both places, she has been marked as "Lost in the Cataclysm, and not seen since". Nilanks grieves for her mother, and hopes she will find her again one day, at the same time, she wonders if she should try to contact the person who is said to be her father.

Character description:
Nilank is a young draenei female, daugther of a high ranked and very much loved paladin of the draenei army, though lost to the Cataclysm (though that is not entirely true, she is atm. on another server, where she has survived the cataclysm, but lost most of her memories, and now ventures through Azeroth, seeking her past).
Nilank chose the path of the shamans in a very young age, mostly because she love the nature so much, but she has not been much away from the Exodar and the islands around it, since the crash either.
Though she has become very near friends with the human female Zetana, who has asked her to join her on her journey around Azeroth.

Loyalities:
Nilank looks up to Velen and respects the Naaru a great deal, she sees herself as very loyal to them and her people. She also sees the allies of the draenei as friends, though she do not know them very well.

Why are you interested joining Light of Argus?
I'd like to do some more RP in wow again, since I have mostly been playing on normal servers for a long time, and miss the exitement it gives me

Love Denise (Thats me, the one behind the screen)

First off Nilank, welcome to the forum and welcome back to the wide wide world of roleplay. Always nice to see another RPer entering the fold!

I'll echo Nataari's comments above. The Exodar only crashed on Azeroth at the start of the Burning Crusade expansion, which was just over 4 years ago now, so unfortunately the timeline isn't really open to what you have in mind :/ But that said, I'll go out on a limb and say that it's possible that some Draenei were brought through the Dark Portal by the Old Horde as prisoners/slave labour. That of course begs the question of how did she escape, et cetera.

About the 'mother marrying a night elf' matter.

Er.
Eeeerrrrr.
I'm... unconvinced. I can see members of differing races being, well, compatible, and possibly becoming close, especially among the two longest-lived races, but interspecies marriage? I'm not saying it's absolutely 100% impossible never-gonna-happen, but, I doubt you'd find a civic official of any Alliance race willing to bless that union.

Those are the only points that I'm concerned about, I liked the rest of Nilank's backstory a lot

Thank you very much for the replies
I will take a look at the lores, and adjust the story

I'd bless any union.

Just wanted to say that I have edited the application, so it should suit the lore much better

Ah, thank you very much, well I will change it for 120 then, just to be sure

Happy to be here..